Author: Janie Braverman

  • spring comes cedar

    spring comes cedar

    an old school erasure




    Source for this three pass erasure (four, but only if one counts the title): “[It’s that time of spring]” from frank: sonnets, by Diane Seuss.



  • So it was

    So it was

    old style, three pass erasure with shadow mountains




    Source: John Mastin, from Through the Sun in an Airship (1909)



  • Pisces

    Pisces


    Seriously? This and other nonsense from The History of Birthdays

    (which I am not vouching for, but can be found HERE).



  • where

    where

    alchemy for DKK



    The alchemized poem:

    A snowy ground with a stem of a dead plant and a rusted, colorful bucket in the foreground.


    Image and source material, Where I Live Now, by Deborah K. Kelly.



  • dogs of war

    dogs of war



    a multiple pass poem

    Source material: War Came to Ukraine and Its Dogs Are Not the Same

    Source material for the source material: Dogs of War: The Effect of War-Inflicted Environmental Damage on Free-Ranging Domestic Dogs



  • Rocky Racoon

    Rocky Racoon



    Source material

    Namesake



  • It’s been a minute

    It’s been a minute

    Actually, it’s been a year since I started posting Thursday mornings on Under Construction, with occasional off-cycle posts.



    Thank you readers – whether you’re a subscriber, follower, fan, or however you’ve arrived.

    Thank you to those who know me, those who know my work, those who have been introduced to Under Construction by someone who knows me or my work. Thank you to those of you who … well, I’m not sure how you’ve found your way here, but I’m glad you did.

    Under Construction is where the door is always open, where we don’t blame the dogs and we don’t answer all calls, where all the doors have automatic openers, and where iguanas are not invasive. It is where we, too, dream of peace. It is for all the poets and all the mourners, and it is where adverbs and nouns are shapeshifters. (If you read all the way to the bottom of the posts, right above the Subscribe button you’ll see what I mean.)

    It’s where poems echo through the years and through the poets – looking at you X. P. CallahanDeborah KellyJosh Datko. Erasures, with links to the source material, are here: Call and Response: owlwe lived and we ate; and war and peace.

    Where I cannot stop writing about residents dying in nursing homes, because residents are always dying in nursing homes. Where birds are poetsbees stir the mirror, and you – readers – are the one thing that matters.



  • those who stand

    those who stand

    an off cycle post

    For those who blow whistles in Minnesota and elsewhere else



    Source material: On Living in the Hour of Cities Under Siege by Carolyn Forché from Otherwhere: New and Selected Poems, 1976-2026 (Scribner Books, forthcoming in September 2026)



  • in New Mexico landlocked

    in New Mexico landlocked

    An old school erasure using a Tombow water-based marker



    “in New Mexico landlocked” is sourced three times from: Anelise Chen, “Clam Down,” from The Daily at The Paris Review.

    Chen’s memoir, Clam Down: A Metamorphosis, is now available.