Author: Janie Braverman

  • Raw pine and antlers

    Raw pine and antlers


    A seven pass poem from “Out West” by Deborah Kay Kelly. Click here to see her accompanying photographs.



    Raw pine and antlers, a few skins. This room, its dusty windows claimed by cottonwoods that shine more than full-grown sunflowers, leaves smooth as persimmon. Under them, sheep shed lanolin and scat on the low breeze.
    We walk downstream. Leaves float under
    the wide-timbered bridge like water-lanterns. We smooth the river beach with our hands and sit.
    Until a bulb-nosed truck stops mid-bridge, a tight noon-
    shadow of gray-green metal, pitted-chrome bumper. Side panels crumpled like monstrous skin. Its engine-greased pulse builds to imminent explosion.
    Who drives the bald cab? Wh
    ose fist pounds the hood? It doesn’t really matter. We walk like giants. When we were children, he shoved our faces in mud, counted to 100, but we are older, and made like a suspension bridge, to flex and persist over smother, even in high winds.

  • A singing heart

    A singing heart

    for JTB, who makes my heart sing


    Photograph of a dried heart-shaped leaf.


    Sourced via 4 passes and a little compression from Jane Hirshfield, “A Hand,” Given Sugar, Given Salt

    Photo by the erasure artist, taken on the Mary Carter Greenway Trail where it lies west of the South Platte River

  • Body Parts

    Body Parts

    A (slightly) late Halloween post




    The time-sensitive source, published on October 31, is here.

    I didn’t see it until November 4, or you would have had it for Halloween!

  • Headstrong

    Headstrong

    An off cycle post about a book I recommend



    Not every book tells a story, but every book has one.

    Headstrong: Embracing Alopecia and Becoming Pañuelo Girl is a book that both tells and has a compelling story.

    Christy Bailey’s memoir is generous, openhearted, and a compelling story. I didn’t want it to end. I wanted to know everything that came after, even though I already knew there wasn’t a lot of after to tell.

    The cover of the book, Headstrong, by Christy Bailey

    Headstrong is also a well crafted memoir. That is the story of this book.

    In the summer of 2025, my friend Lia Woodall told me about the collaborative effort to complete and then publish Christy Bailey’s memoir.

    Christy had written a draft of her memoir. When she fell ill, she asked Susanna Donato to be her literary executor.

    Susanna, readers of this book owe you a debt of gratitude for saying yes.

    Christy Bailey died in 2015 from Inflammatory Breast Cancer (IBC), a rare and aggressive type of breast cancer.

    Susanna took on the task of revising Headstrong. She is credited on the cover as the editor, but completing a book is more than editing a book. Lia wrote the Epilogue: Whatever ComesTerry Lynn Arnold, Founder of the IBC Network Foundation, wrote the Afterword. Susanna wrote the Acknowledgements.

    Then, with help, Susanna took on the task of getting Headstrong published.

    Well done, Christy Bailey. Well done, Susanna Donato. Well done, Lia Woodall and Terry Lynn Arnold.

    You can find Headstrong: Embracing Alopecia and Becoming Pañuelo Girl here.

    For the writers among us: Where you can find your own literary executor is a mystery to me. What I do know now is how much it matters.

  • gaze

    gaze

    & when we don’t gaze





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    when we don’t gaze

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    The poems:



    Source material: Charles O. Hartman, “Fascination,” from Island

    The word gaze appears in each stanza of “gaze.”

    There is no gaze in “when we don’t gaze”.

  • Jane Explodes Narrative

    Jane Explodes Narrative


    Source text is an excerpt from Meander, Spiral, Explode: Design and Pattern in Narrativeby Jane Alison.


  • not this

    not this

    an erasure of an erasure



    Source material: The Ferguson Report: An Erasureby Nicole Sealey.

    Put this book on your list for the Sealey Challenge next August.

  • Eve as a tree

    Eve as a tree

    An old school erasure.

    Materials and tools used include colored pencils, buff corrective tape, white corrective fluid, black pen, tape, the image of an apple, and the inversion of an image.



    Ink drawing of a tree, seemingly upside down, with an apple off to the right side.  The apple has a bite taken out of it.


    Sources: W. S. Merwyn “Unchopping a Tree” and Untitled by Milton Glaser


  • UTHRA

    UTHRA

    A three-pass erasure poem







    One translation of UTHRA is “divine messenger of the light.” There are others here.

    The source material is “Cutthroat” by my friend and collaborator the poet MK Francisco. What collaboration, you ask? Stay tuned. And stay patient.



    Process note for the curious: